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Jun 12, 2011 19:47:39 GMT -5
Post by uldrid on Jun 12, 2011 19:47:39 GMT -5
Hey guys,
My name's literally Uldrid. I live in Kansas. Nice to meet you guys.
I can't promise that I will stick around, but if I like it here, you'll see me more often.
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Jun 13, 2011 21:53:56 GMT -5
Post by Cain on Jun 13, 2011 21:53:56 GMT -5
Hey guys, My name's literally Uldrid. I live in Kansas. Nice to meet you guys. I can't promise that I will stick around, but if I like it here, you'll see me more often. Welcome to the board and I hope you enjoy your stay.
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Jun 13, 2011 22:10:02 GMT -5
Post by Gamov on Jun 13, 2011 22:10:02 GMT -5
[Additional obligatory welcome message]
Welcome, Uldrid. If you have any questions, just ask or PM a staff member.
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Jun 13, 2011 22:18:42 GMT -5
Post by MikDaTv on Jun 13, 2011 22:18:42 GMT -5
[Additional obligatory welcome message] Welcome, Uldrid. If you have any questions, just ask or PM a staff member. If you want any answers to those questions, just ask or PM me.
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Jun 13, 2011 22:31:20 GMT -5
Post by Zilfer on Jun 13, 2011 22:31:20 GMT -5
^Try to ignore the insane amount of salt however on that one. XD lol J/K
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Jun 14, 2011 0:34:22 GMT -5
Post by uldrid on Jun 14, 2011 0:34:22 GMT -5
Well, I do have a couple questions pertaining to two of the moderators on this site. MikDaTV and Gamov, I was wondering if I might be able to input a character from each of you two into the background of my own.
Gamov, I would like to use your evil character, and Mik, if you have any neutral force wielders, I would very much appreciate the volunteering of said character. Yes, I see that zilfer would be the better choice but Zilfer is kinda shadowy and I need someone more...militaristic, and you seem the type.
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Jun 14, 2011 0:43:32 GMT -5
Post by Gamov on Jun 14, 2011 0:43:32 GMT -5
Imputing a character in what way? As a simple reference? Or would it be something more involved like personal training or some such thing? I personally don't have much of a problem if you feel the need to reference one of my characters in your own bio. I would just like to know the capacity to which you would like to use them.
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Jun 14, 2011 2:18:20 GMT -5
Post by uldrid on Jun 14, 2011 2:18:20 GMT -5
Your evil character is going to be the lord that kills Senator Talishoan of Kiribi (one of the Colonial planets), his secretary (my character's father, Kaliiran), the secretary's family (two brothers, one sister, and a mother), and then finds the last sibling to be of some use. So, you then use your sith powers to mentally dominate a seven year old girl into submition (enter Uldrid).
The reasons for the Senator's death is because he payed you to get out of some debt with the local crime lords because of his lack of restraint when it came to the female body. From there, you made sure that the Senator could not pay for his debt by use of a spy network or other tool that you currently have. Then, when it comes time to pay the debt, you take his life, and control of the planet...for a while.
You forge Uldrid into a tool of destruction, first by taking note of her naturally high intellect and pushing her to delve into the sciences and mechanics. You give her full access to the libraries of Coriscant and the engineering bays of one of your greatest ships. Her first three years in your service would be dedicated to her creation of a war ship. Although she would be only seven to ten years old, you have your subordinates teach her everything she needs to know on schematics on everything from cruisers to battleships. Because of your domination over her mind, she willingly complies and succeeds after a few prods and pokes from rather unhealthy tasks (torture if she doesn't succeed in certain areas, loss and sith healing of small appendages such as the first joint on her left index finger and so on).
Her first cruiser was the Namana-class light cruiser, which was presented to her in scraps. Your lord forced her to repair the thing with little and only that which was absolutely necessary. If she couldn't find the part she needed, she would learn to take unnecessary portions of the vehicle and craft them into the part she needed. After one year of blood and pain, she succeeded, and that cruiser has stuck with her since. Hence forth, she named her new ship, Bloodbane.
After Bloodbane was forged, you presented her with a Z-95 Headhunter, with both of its wings purposefully smashed to bits and the cockpit caved in. Nonetheless, she went straight to it. The wings were no problem, but when it came to the cockpit, she had to start the wiring and programming of the ship from scratch as well. Learning as much as she could from your lord's assistants, she was able to create an all new program that suited her own needs. By use of extra parts that she had found tucked away inside the pipe work of the engines, she was able to craft her own micro-repair droids that would fix small wire tears and structural cracks in the heat of combat. This starfighter taxed her another two years of her time. Once the newly rebuilt craft was finished, she named it Nightbane. As a last note to complete her work, she added the same repair droids from garbage scraps of the old ones to Bloodbane.
Once Uldrid came to a half mark on her tenth year in service, your lord began to teach her combat at his own training facility at the planet of Tepasi, first beginning with biology of the various races across the universe, and then each afternoon until sundown, she would be faced against that opponent and would have to take down five of them before the sun set. If she failed, more grievous torture was placed upon her. No wounds were ever inflicted, but she felt pure pain, and lots of it. So, as a result, she went through the human, wookies, and other mammalian races within three months. She then mastered taking down reptilian races like the Rodians and Trandoshans, all established in her brain within the following month. The plant, insect and invertebrate races took another four because they were different within themselves. And then lastly was the Aquatic and Avian races, which took six months because of grueling training of ranged weaponry with the avians and underwater melee combat with the aquatics.
Then, when her training seemed to be finally finished, you came upon something within her. During a duel with an especially enraged Mon Calamari, you noticed that she was anticipating the thing's moves far too easily, even when she was underwater. On top of that, you don't recall her taking one breath of air and the whole battle went on for a little over half an hour. Noticing physical control beyond most of your most even seasoned men, along with mental prowess that dashed even the dreams of your most aspiring scientists, you decided to take her training to the next step.
Again, only giving to Uldrid what she absolutely needed, your lord presented her with a broken lightsaber, almost rusted the whole way through, but still workable, and off she went to work. This time, she wasn't given the books from libraries or assistance from your lords personnel. You wanted to make positively sure that she knew the object that would become her life from the inside out and back again. When she repaired the saber within two months time, you presented a new one to her, this one missing a piece, so, she would then have to create it from garbage scraps of the previous lightsaber. If she didn't have the materials, your lord would send her off in her starfighter to the closest planet in order to either steal or kill for it. No money was ever to be used. And she was only able to use the lightsaber she first created, although, at times, the saber would short out, so she would have to find replacement parts for it as well, adding on more kills for your lord and letting the fear of a "shadow" take grip on many of the empire controlled planets.
This would continue on till she reached her twelfth year, and then everything changed for her.
Instead of giving her an opponent to go up against for her trial of skill, you sent her to an abandoned shipyard which was being sucked in by a black hole. Her task was to go in, retrieve a rock your lord had placed a seal on, in the deepest parts, and with her literally blinded, she had to go in and find it before the black hole made contact with the wreckage. The time until contact was two weeks and she made it out on the very last day. She had gotten lost on the third day in the opposite edge of the yard and made herself go into a trance that would slow down her metabolism while her mind "felt" around for the rock. At times, she would assume success, but would never find the seal and would then go back into her trance so as to conserve energy. She continued this until she finally came upon the stone.
For the trial of courage, your lord realized that she had to be placed in something a little more terrifying, so, he placed her in a simulation of battle. Uldrid was pitted against a man who looked very much like her father along with mother and siblings. Each one was a different aspect and emotion of Uldrid and therefore, Uldrid had to take on beastial malformations of her past. All five of the members would attack her at once and if she was wounded, her body actually took the wound and so, she would have to get up again and fight back. Most of her wounds were only cuts and scrapes, but as the battle went on and with her sbilings all finished, the price of failure grew greater and greater. At one point she was on her back with both of her legs seared clean off and her left arm ripped straight from the socket while she defended herself on her back with only her sword arm left. Determination and pure hatred for your lord who had placed her against herself awoke a power within her when he last arm had been sliced clear. Suddenly, before the final swing of her father, her body emblazoned in shadowy threads rose up from the floor and halted the man midswing. Then, she unleashed all of her bestial emotion upon the construct before her, crumbling it to the size of a one-inch diameter rock and turning the round object into a ball of onyx with writhing shadows of its own.
The cheapest android parts that your lord could find were attached to her body right after the second trial, all while making sure that she felt every possible amount of pain while in surgery. From there, your apprentice was given the task of creating new parts for her limbs, enhancing those parts, and forging her own body into a construct of her own talent. Since she had the smarts for battle and reflexes to hold off five men, she felt that her strength and speed were fine being average, and thus never enhanced her limbs for she knew (after research), that they would only hinder her in combat when she needed her energy for when it truly mattered. One thing she never changed though, was her sight. Ever since the first trial when your lord seared her eyes shut, she used the force to sense everything around her, and from there on, never needed her eyes again.
Because of the physical sacrifice she went through from her last fight, Uldrid had also passed the Trial of the Flesh, even though it took another half a year to recuperate from her wounds.
After the second trial and up to the age of 15, your lord imprisoned Uldrid in a darkened and secluded room deep within the confines of a location even she wasn't able to detect or determine.
~and this is where i shall take a break...goodnight guys (HUGE YAWN), tell me what you think thus far~
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Jun 14, 2011 16:29:37 GMT -5
Post by MikDaTv on Jun 14, 2011 16:29:37 GMT -5
Gamov, I would like to use your evil character, and Mik, if you have any neutral force wielders, I would very much appreciate the volunteering of said character. Yes, I see that zilfer would be the better choice but Zilfer is kinda shadowy and I need someone more...militaristic, and you seem the type. Under no circumstances would i ever admit that Zilfer is the better choice... even if he is i would never admit it. However in this particular case i'm not sure i can help you. I have Jedi and i have non-force users. I even have a crew of pirates, a drunken doctor/scientist, a self aware AI, an amoral and completely sadistic doctor obsessed with genetic experiments, and a cocky pilot.
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Jun 14, 2011 16:32:55 GMT -5
Post by Zilfer on Jun 14, 2011 16:32:55 GMT -5
Gamov, I would like to use your evil character, and Mik, if you have any neutral force wielders, I would very much appreciate the volunteering of said character. Yes, I see that zilfer would be the better choice but Zilfer is kinda shadowy and I need someone more...militaristic, and you seem the type. Under no circumstances would i ever admit that Zilfer is the better choice... even if he is i would never admit it. However in this particular case i'm not sure i can help you. I have Jedi and i have non-force users. I even have a crew of pirates, a drunken doctor/scientist, a self aware AI, an amoral and completely sadistic doctor obsessed with genetic experiments, and a cocky pilot. lol at least you admit to the possibility that I might be a better choice.
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Jun 14, 2011 17:12:10 GMT -5
Post by uldrid on Jun 14, 2011 17:12:10 GMT -5
In that case, ill just stick with being sith for a while. up until sith come back into the forum.
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