The Third Xanairan Empire

[Moonfire]

Also, quick question concerning something I read. How can the Xanairans be the only species on the planet?

What do they eat? 0.o

Not a very good biosphere goin' on there.

EDIT: Also, what do you mean by an 'earth raptor'?

As in the infamous dinosaur the velociraptor? Or as the birds of prey such as falcons, hawks and eagles that are also known as raptors?

[MikDaTv]

Jun 26, 2010 16:21:57 GMT -5 Moonfire said:

As in the infamous dinosaur the velociraptor? Or as the birds of prey such as falcons, hawks and eagles that are also known as raptors?

Or the pack hunti....AHHH COUGAR!!!!!

[Ragsmire]

Ya know there is one other thing that's be nagging at me, that being the whole naming Scheme...I mean sure X is a cool letter, but if they come from an entirely different galaxy then the SW one...how come they use the same alphabet as us? I would think some big bad war mongering aliens from far far away would have their own language which would have a different set of written and spoken properties tied to them...?

I would like to bring to attention these Laws of Xa briefly as well.

Law One: All with Xanairan blood in them, MUST have their first and last name start with the letter 'X'. If any refuse this order, will be killed and their body will be dropped into space, where I might spare your life in the AfterLife.

Well one i'd assume they'd be given these X names at birth...so can babies refuse that order? and second who is I that might spare their life in the "afterlife"?

that's really the only law i'd like to address for now.

[Emperor Xana]

ok, updated

[Emperor Xana]

The "I" is Xa, the Xanairan god, ZOMG! NO WAIZ!

[Moonfire]

You can just call him Rag XD

[Ragsmire]

Uh yeah Rag. Rags, Ragu, they are all fine. so long as it honors the symbol i have become in the form of the first three letters.

And thanks for answering in regards to the "I" Clears things up...a bit.

[Ragsmire]

Alright well i'm going to try and help you out here a bit more Xana seeing how Odin must still be recovering from his initial inspection of the species by pointing out some areas that can definitely use...a lot of work.

First of all Mik was right in saying we are drowning in a sea of text, can you set portions of the cultures section into paragraphs that can more easily be read?

And still this Xanairans years things, what the fuck is that. pardon the french. You do realize that not only is living for a billion million years or whatever crazy as hell, but to insist they have "Xanairan years" like dog ones is just...something next to insanity. I can't outright say fuck that and force you to remove it, but I'd personally like a scale on how we can judge these Dog-Ah i mean "Xanairan years" to our human ones.

and is 70 billion not a lot of fucking huge ass lizards to all live on the same earth sized planet, i mean we're running out of room with well over 7 bill, how the hell does that number times a jillion fit on a planet our size, i assume the excuse used will be they live in space on their war ships, if so, i want specs. If it happens to be those hundred moons, i want a general description of how each as an atmosphere and such.

I'd add something more on the culture but like Mik pointed out, Wall o' Text...so yeah.

Ultimately When it comes right down to it, in all brutal honesty, this race needs a crap load, i'm talking fucking ginormous amount, of attentional work on all aspects, I'm guessing the only reason you didn't blow our minds with all the well rounded and perfectly fitting details before is the whole editor situation, so please put me in my god damn place with some awesome shit from that book once you get it back from this editor.... >.>...i'll be eagerly awaiting the day.

EDIT:

Jun 26, 2010 14:06:54 GMT -5 Emperor Xana said:

by my site could help

Okay now that is a lie, i happened to have some free time on my hands so i decided to go check out your site and become enlightened but the place is a...ah how to put it. A chajamble, an utter mess. I mean the only post in there with any kind of information that could possibly be seen as helpful was the copy and paste you have from here, otherwise its a land of complete vagueness.

You list well over a dozen races with only like two i've ever heard of, one of them i'm not sure most would count. Some random "Phase" Thingy that is suppose to help, And you list the book titles of your "series" but that's just it, like you expect people to have found these drafts and read through the madness that most surely are jotted in completely random order within.

Now i'm truly sorry i'm coming down as an ass hole here, this is generally Mik's job, But i've just wasted half an hour of my life looking through your "Site" For answers, assuming we were misunderstanding you in someway, i now see that i've been tricked.

I mean...uh....i can't even go on at this point...just...

[Emperor Xana]

... alright, but the site needs some.... improvements BIG time

[MikDaTv]

Jun 29, 2010 4:25:18 GMT -5 Ragsmire said:

Now i'm truly sorry i'm coming down as an ass hole here, this is generally Mik's job,

you were doing pretty good at it too until you started apologizing.

I suppose i should go through this in my usual fashion.

The first thing that needs to be addressed is the planet itself. There's very little information on it. More, it needs more. a lot more. there are books and books and books worth of information on just single continents of the planet earth, you can write more than four sentances about this entire planet.

We're looking for things like climate, weather, titantic activity, cities, orbital period. What kind of star does it orbit? What kind of atmosphere does it have?

It does not have 100 planets the size of Io. It doesn't. I'm telling you this as fact. The gravitational forces alone would make everything extremely unstable. There's also no way that a moon the size of Io supports a jungle climate. There's no way a moon the size of our moon supports a jungle climate.

also the fact that there's supposed to be 100 of these moons, all of identical size, spinning around the planet without coliding ever? Come on now, really?

then there's the 70 billion people. did you just go to findastupidlyhighnumber.com and put in whatever number it cranked out? The population of earth is around 7 or 8 billion people.

and there's no other species on the planet? you have a planet, with 70 billion people on it, who are immortal for the most part, and no other species? no plants? no animals? No Lions, Tigers or Bears? How did this species survive without food? I mean, before they had the ability of space travel so they could go to this moon the size of Io that magically maintains a tropical atmospher, how did they survive? or evolve for that matter?

What the hell is an evolution phase?

and i will just end my post here with this. Deer/Cat hybrid...

DEER/CAT HYBRID.

[Emperor Xana]

so many questions, -sighs- I'll get on it and Xanaira was a jungle world until the planet had a evoled into a volcanic planet, the moons are farther apart from each other and the planet orbits around FOUR suns

[MikDaTv]

Jun 29, 2010 11:30:46 GMT -5 Emperor Xana said:

so many questions, -sighs- I'll get on it and Xanaira was a jungle world until the planet had a evoled into a volcanic planet, the moons are farther apart from each other and the planet orbits around FOUR suns

Oh, there's a lot more questions than this my friend. i'm just starting with the planet itself to start off with. We'll get to this four suns business later.

[Starholdt]

^This

[Cain]

Jun 29, 2010 11:30:46 GMT -5 Emperor Xana said:

so many questions, -sighs- I'll get on it and Xanaira was a jungle world until the planet had a evoled into a volcanic planet, the moons are farther apart from each other and the planet orbits around FOUR suns

You can't say I didn't try and warn you.

[Crazy O]

Your entire planet is layout is impossible. Before you stay I would not know what I am taking about, I have taken college physics, orbital mechanics, and read a lot on the topic. I can tell you flat out it is impossible.

First problem: Orbiting four suns. You do realize the unstability of what you are saying. Binary stars orbit a focus between the two, three stars normally orbit around the largest star. Four would require either a larger star to orbit around or no planets around it to screw up a perfect four body orbit.

Second Problem: An earth size planet does not have enough gravitation pull to even hope to have 100 moons, You would be lucky to have three or four moons the size of Io.

Third Problem: A body the size of Io does not have enough mass to have an atmosphere. The air would simple float away into space.

These are just three problems I would like to be addressed.