The Third Xanairan Empire

[MikDaTv]

Jun 29, 2010 16:54:37 GMT -5 Crazy O said:

Your entire planet is layout is impossible. Before you stay I would not know what I am taking about, I have taken college physics, orbital mechanics, and read a lot on the topic. I can tell you flat out it is impossible.

First problem: Orbiting four suns. You do realize the unstability of what you are saying. Binary stars orbit a focus between the two, three stars normally orbit around the largest star. Four would require either a larger star to orbit around or no planets around it to screw up a perfect four body orbit.

Second Problem: An earth size planet does not have enough gravitation pull to even hope to have 100 moons, You would be lucky to have three or four moons the size of Io.

Third Problem: A body the size of Io does not have enough mass to have an atmosphere. The air would simple float away into space.

These are just three problems I would like to be addressed.

Well, technically a lot of planets in the star wars universe should not exist. tatooine and manaan for example. There's no way a single planet would be entirely dominated by a single climate.

Baby steps O. Baby steps. First we address Deer/Cat Hybrids, then we address the orbital mechanics. Like i told him. We'll get to this four star business after we actually have a planet to orbit them.

[Darth Hades]

Xana please understand these people are helping you. Even if Mik seems he doesn't and like Chastising others for the most part. People here are honest. And good luck with your planet/speices.

Listen to these experts and don't be afraid to ask them question if you aren't sure what you're doing.

AGAIN GOOD LUCK.

And to rag, wow just wow. You soon are gonna be Mik number 2. lol

[Emperor Xana]

ok, its updated.

[MikDaTv]

Now the planet is the size of Jupiter?!!!! Xinivaminuium?!?!?!?!? gah! We're going backwards. And the grammar is atrocious, absolutely atrocious.

Ok, Xana, stop. just stop. We're going to start over.

First things first. Your planet does not orbit 4 stars. it doesn't. it's just doesn't. Don't ask why, just trust me. Don't argue with me about it, you'll lose.

It orbits a single, yellow star like our sun. It has a standard Elliptical orbit and is approximately 14,000 kilometers in diameter. That’s a little bit bigger than the planet Earth. It has a current population of about 10 billion Xanairans.

As for climate, it will have been a dry and hot planet for the most part. with moist regions around it's sparse oceans and at the poles. A thin atmosphere allowed the rays of the sun to come through which was the reason for it's heat. The moist area's supported the worlds only lush areas which consist of rolling grasslands and a few forests.

The Xanairans evolved in the hot and dry climate of their homeworld. They're thick reptilian skin protects them from the sun's harmful rays. Being most active during the morning and afternoon hours when it isn't as hot, they developed a keen sense of sight to hunt prey. They've also evolved into efficient water savers. Their body stores water for long periods of time giving them impressive range over land away from a renewable water source.

As they evolved they grew upright, standing on two legs. They're height allowing them to see prey at farther distances. Intelligence eventually evolved and they grew into communities.

That all explains why they evolved into reptilians.

They're planet changed when a meteor struck the planets equator. 700,000 Xanairans died upon impact of the meteor and billions more in the years afterward. The meteor cracked the planets crust causing massive volcanic eruptions and a nearly perpetual winter all across the planet.

Those Xanairans who survived quickly began searching for ways to adapt. The survivors built their communities near the active volcano's where they could survive off the heat from the lava. They're efforts to survive turned towards space and they took to the skies to escape the harsh environment of the planets surface.

Various space stations were constructed in orbit to house their species which included hydroponics farms and artificial environments for livestock.

The planets animal and plant life were hunted to extinction by the Xanairans and almost all food production was left to orbital facilities.

Eventually they traveled to their neighboring planet, Xaumgrad in order to expand. The heavily forested and jungle like climate of Xaumgrad provided ample food supply for the Xanairans and it's bounty allowed them to survive.

several thousand years pass. The Xanairans fully develop their solar system with orbital facilities. They develop faster than light travel and move to other star systems within their galaxy.

Eventually the surface activity of their planet calms down and they recolonize it. Their reclaimed homeworld becomes the capitol of their empire. It's harsh surface made livable by technology and teraforming techniques.

The harsh and destructive nature of their history breeds harsh and destructive creatures. Their zealous devotion to their religion and the knowledge that they have survived so very much drive them to subjugate other worlds and other sentient species throughout their galaxy.

Stealing the best technology from the species they conquer, they develop into an advanced society of violent warriors who seek to rule the entirety of their galaxy and establish a religious and racial dominance.

With the discovery of other nearby Galaxies, they’ve dispatched emissaries of their religion to these galaxies in suspended animation. Though it may take hundreds of thousands of years to reach the next nearest galaxy, they feel that these emissaries will bring the light of Xa to the savage untamed parts of the universe and open the way to conquer these galaxies.


ok, done. that's about a page of information. It took me about 45 minutes during lunch to write and they're hardly any details. you may have it if you wish.

notice i left out any mention of 10,000,000 year life spans. I did that because it's stupid. Longer life spans actually limit evolution. if, like you say, a Xanairan generation is once every 1,000,000 years, then it would take them.... you know what, i'm going to just let you Wiki Evolution and figure it out for yourself.

notice i also left out any mention of being immune to all diseases, because that too, is stupid. the diseases on your planet will evolve and adapt to their enviornment.

They would also get cancer. Nuclear weapons have nothing to do with it.

and please for the love of god get rid of the Deer/cat hybrid thing.

[Crazy O]

just gave up I see. Been there and done that before.

[MikDaTv]

gave up? I practically wrote the damn thing for him.

[Damocles]

wow this whole thread is wow...

[Emperor Xana]

Well, my idea of Xanairans might be dumb to you all, but I''l guess I'll have to argee to this.
Mlik, Xanairans have a 100,000 year life span, not 1,000,000. They age every one hundred human years

[MikDaTv]

Jun 30, 2010 20:05:03 GMT -5 Emperor Xana said:

Well, my idea of Xanairans might be dumb to you all, but I''l guess I'll have to argee to this.
Mlik, Xanairans have a 100,000 year life span, not 1,000,000. They age every one hundred human years

if it takes 100 years for their planet to make a single orbit making a single Xanairan year, and they have a life span of 100,000 years that makes their average life span 10,000,000 earth years. That's your math not mine.

but even if it is 100,000 earth years, that's still grotesquely stupid. They'd literally take billions of years to evolve. The Universe is only 13 or 14 billion years old.

but none of this is the point. The point is that in 45 minutes I wrote something that is both longer, more detailed and better written than what it's taken you a week to accomplish. I think it would be better if you drop this for now and get to work on your plan B character because this mess is going to take a while to sort out. I mean did you even bother to look at the other Species and planets that have been posted in the New Ideas board? the ones that have been accepted? compare this to those and get a clue.

And for the record, yes, i do think this is a dumb idea. It's cliche it's been done before a hundred times. Evil alien race from another galaxy comes to conquer us all blah blah blah. You literally have hundreds of species to choose from already in the star wars universe but you decided that none of them were good enough and decided to make your own. which normally is just fine. The problem is in that you made a species that is practically a carbon copy of a dozen other species already in star wars. This tells me two things. The first is that you never bothered to do any kind of research. and the second is that you just don't care. and if you don't care, why should i?

[Emperor Xana]

oh...
I think i posted the Xanairans wrong

[Moonfire]

... You just copy and pasted exactly what Mik said and put in his Homeworld.

Seriously? Not even going to attempt to paraphrase or anything?

[MikDaTv]

Jul 2, 2010 10:14:57 GMT -5 Moonfire said:

... You just copy and pasted exactly what Mik said and put in his Homeworld.

Seriously? Not even going to attempt to paraphrase or anything?

I did say he could have it. At least the grammar for that portion of it is at least somewhat acceptable now.

[Ragsmire]

All with Xanairan blood in them, MUST have their first and last name start with the letter 'X'. If any refuse this order, will be killed and their body will be dropped into space, where I might spare your life in the AfterLife, Xanairans shall get their name at the age of 5 (in Xanairan years). Only ones that could refuse the name wold be the parents or guardians.

Its just occurred to me that, if they age one year for every hundred of ours, which is crazy don't let me give off the vibe its not, wouldn't that mean one "Baby" Xanairan would go through five hundred, five hundred let me repeat that, years without a name...ah....what the hell do the parnets call it for that long time?

And i'd have to agree with mooney on the copy/paste thing, real nice effort your putting into your race, take note it is still yours cause if it were Mik's, which it seems to be turning into, it would make a LOT more sense. >.>

Oh my god, i think i died a little bit reading through the "Updated" Cultures section....so now i will, have mercy on my soul, try and explain what's wrong with it. I'll do this in classic Mik Fashion take each portion one at a time and putting it on the chopping block, so enjoy. ;D

Xanairans are the most dangerous beings in their galaxy as they fight the Resistance, a large group who has fought them for many years. They dominate their enemies without mercy nor forgiveness. Xanairans are feared and known as destroyers of the many worlds they've burned and destroyed ever since Xana took the Throne of the Third Xanairan Empire, or The Third Age of Xa. Once they came to this,new, galaxy, they decided to try and expand their empire here, there forces have been divided across these new stars and ready to fight.

Okay really i can't see anything wrong with this considering its just the usual BS from new members about how awesome their character is, Blah, Blah, blah. So it gets a pass.

They believe in their god, Xa, the first to create a Xaith Empire, a Xanairan Empire race bent on killing at all life. They are in the Third Age of Xa, and their Emperor has led with honor and pride while killing their enemies. Xanairans, in battle, are ruthless and will stop at nothing' to be victorious! They are very well know in their galaxy for their massive fleets, created by one lone space station in the galaxy where they came from, this station is called Black Shadow.They have produced massive lines of armor, weapons, ships, and food.

Ah, i take an offense to this, Massive space station thingy, sounds like a star forge, which was a super weapon, which are not only banned on site, but also totally and utterly lame. I'd like a detailed elaboration on it, or for it to be struck from record.

Plus,as with most of it not constructed by Mik, the grammar is awful.

The Xanairan race has seen more war than any other being known, they've fought humans in their galaxy. The war between the Resistance and the Third Xanairan Empire had weaken the humans, but they kept on fighting until the Xanairans gave up, which they didn't. Xanairans had created ships able to render worlds lifeless, only five ships are known for this super weapon that are on these ships.

Okay, now you've done it, utilizing more of such a hideous and revolting thing, Bad grammar! Oh, and there is the obvious use of the words "Super weapon." First of all what the hell does it mean that "the war had weaken the humans" then to go on and say they continued fighting until the Xanairans gave up, which then you counteracted that by saying. "Which they don't." Then how'd they give up in the first place?

Please i dunno about the grammar but you HAVE to remove the super weapons, they are not allowed on site. Somehow one particular member managed to sneak one on, and for some reason another was approved by the head Admin for the anniversary games, but in general they are not permitted.

Xanairans are immune to all disease, except cancer, due to the war against the humans when Xanairans had invaded Earth many times and won almost, but humans used nuclear weapons with their fight against the Xanairans, which led the Xanairans into getting cancer. These beings have long life span, so they can live more, fight more, live more, ect.

Well right off the bat there is Grammar again, but who am i kidding at this point it needs fixin' at every turn. So onto some real business. This immune to all disease bull, no, no, cut it out, stupid is an understatement. Sickness helps build the immune system and so on, i could list a few things but really would it matter?

Just let me tell you this, Keep that part in there and i will personally exterminate everyone of these guys with a biological weapon, and since they've never been been sick it will just rip them apart...now you see our point, Mik and i are trying to help.

Even with the long life span, female Xanairans can get pregnant until they are 10,000 years old (In Xanairan years). Xanairans' population expanded much during the Rest between 1634-1636, which lead to colonizing on Xanairan controled worlds in their territory and onto some of Xanaira's moons, or into space stations. Xanairan ships are larger than human ships and are powerful. Each Xanairan ship has two brigdes: One on the top (where it is visible) and one inside the ship near the ship's core, which is powered by a Xanairan nuclear element, Xinivaminuium. This source is found in the air of a gas giant in the Xa System, their home system. If one of these cores are destroyed on a planet, you kiss life good bye, which made the humans' war effort hard during a Xanairan invasion, but when destroyed in space, the blast will take a moon or two entire fleets.

Alright, lets continue on with numbers that mean nothing to us in the Star wars galaxy! hurray! Alright so let me say BBY is how dates are calculated in SW, i dunno if those numbers are suppose to represent our years or what but they gotta change.

Okay now onto this whole ship jazz-again. if they are so mighty that they would count as a super weapon kiss that madness goodbye, if they are not super weapon level i want specs on these ships, and an explanation on how this...ah Xinivaminuium works.

So Xanairans were kings of space battles, unless they lose a good amount of ships, which has never happened. With half of the Xanairan fleet in the new galaxy they found and the other half in their home galaxy, they still keep their strenght and Faith up. Xanairans, before the wars, were the galaxy's most respectful race ever known, but when the wars began, they were known throught out the stars for their powerful imperial might. So now, they have no rescent activity now in this galaxy, but in their home galaxy, theres more news than in the HoloNets.

Oh boy. Can i ask, WTF? a "King" Of space warfare wouldn't need superior numbers to win a conflict, any rookie commander could do that, i know of at least one person who thought himself a "Tactician" When in reality he just hind behind huge numbers of ships, and bodies, and a super weapon ship until he made the rookie mistake we all knew he would, AND THEN, you know what he did? He had to call his mommy for help more or less but that still didn't work, so through winning enough he managed to save his characters life but lost the stupid ship.

So in conclusion of this point, Bull shit, true "Kings" Of space combat would not need incredible numbers to win...not look i went on a rant and ultimately resolved nothing on this point. >.>

The Xanairan flag is with a red with hints of jade green 'X' with black for the main color of the flag. Xanairans are not to be trifled with due to their strengh of ripping arms and legs out the sockets. Some Xanairans are gifted with this "Force" that they don't experience until they are 23 years old (in Xanairan years). And Xanairans with the "Force" increases their life span longer if used the right way their god think is the good way.

Well i have no idea what this flag looks like cause of the grammar. Now i'm sure this goes without saying and that you knew it when writing, but using the force doesn't take a huge toll on people's life spans here on site. I mean Cain pulled a fifty plus story building down without so much as breaking a sweat, and trust me that was not for goodness sake. Just pointing out that one doesn't have to use the force nicely for it to extend their life span.

The Xanairans' Third Xanairan Empire have been at war since Xana became Emperor, these wars showed the galaxy their strenght. The three wars are: Code Wars, Dark Wars, and Saltiude Wars. The Code War was Xana's warning to all who dare to stop his empire, which a Resistance formed and fought against the empire (1636-2055). Even though the Code War ended in 2055, another war became known when the Xanairans attacked the humans on Earth in 2055, which began the Dartk Wars when the humans lead the Resistance into battle with bravery and honor. The Dark Wars ended after Xana had heard that his new weapon was complete in 3009 during the Final Battle Over Vos. The next war began in 3109, which was known as the Saltiude War, when Xana declared war against the Angels of the Mystic Territory due to them calling the Xanairan god a 'False God' and that the Xanairan race was a sin. After they declared war, the Resistance came and defended the Angels from the Xanairans' might!

Okay, and here again is where i would like a history of the Third Xanairan Empire, or ya know what, the entire race, and not in Mik's words ether. And what the hell is this resistance of humans you keep going on about? Plus am i to take it they come from our Galaxy, these crazy's come from the Mikey way? I mean earth is...here right.

And, Oh the icing on the cake, You dare mention the angels from your site, the one of two races i had a vague idea about? I do not care what Galaxy your from so long as you can come to SW from it you cannot and will not fight angels, if memory serves from what little i managed to glean from my visit to your wacky land these are the tradition Angels that are born after death, no way no how.

Xanairan language is hard to learn, since some words have more than five meanings. Every sentance, when speaking it, you have to say Xa because it shows respect to their god and all Xanairan life. Most Xanairans are respectful to other races' gods or goddesses, but they believe Xa give them the will to live and be better than any of the lower races.

Oh, Okay nice, we get a little stab at their language, which means i guess they have their own after all. Which still bags the question why would they need X's. I mean X is an English letter, not some extraterrestrial one, I'm going off the assuming you're to lazy to try and make something of a new language yourself, i can't exactly blame you its now easy, i didn't even do it for the Zante. So fuck it.

[Emperor Xana]

These creatures are what i thought of them! Xanairans are Xanairans, they have long life spans, freakishly tall, evil aliens. The forge ship and the super weapon ships are in their galaxy, not the SW galaxy. Xa is their god, and makes the rules for their race. These beings are great and this info i had for them is what Xanairans are, not some ugly turtle for example, note i'm in a bad mood and this is like emaking the Xanairan race, which is going to far, since i have rights on them.
My applogies, for PMSing at you all, do to other issues.

[Damocles]

Look dude, I'm gonna be nice about this, since it seems lost on you. As someone who comes up with stupid ideas just for the sake of it (I came up with Force Dragonballs, and a Force scouter...so you see what I mean), no one on this site is telling you that your creation sucks. Its just its not acceptable for the standards of this site, you may have put a lot of time and effort into this idea, but trust me if you have up to 6 people on this site telling you its not a good idea, while the same six people are saying the force scouter is a pratical idea, I think you need to reevaluate (10 point word ladies and gentlemen) exactly what you did when you came up with this race.