Post by Zilfer on Jan 16, 2013 17:27:46 GMT -5
A few things, does he have no personal items like a weapon? Blaster? Special armor? How does he get around does he have a ship?
Also could you avoid the use of BLACK as text. For the skin i'm using I have to highlight to see it and it can be rather annoying.
Secondly, is about the bio. Good quick summery of his life though the Sith ruled the Republic so it's kinda hard to work for the "republic" and not for the Sith. It was quite awhile before the Sith declined out of the Republic and it became the Republic again and the Sith have disappeared. So you might need to rework the profile just a little bit. I can tell you however during the time of the Sith occupation the "Federation" popped up kinda as the "good republic replacement." The Jedi also went to the Federation which was an allied group of planets in the far reaches of space. It's possible he worked with them who were former Republic against the Sith.
Other than that it looks pretty good. Let me know when you make the changes.
Also could you avoid the use of BLACK as text. For the skin i'm using I have to highlight to see it and it can be rather annoying.
Secondly, is about the bio. Good quick summery of his life though the Sith ruled the Republic so it's kinda hard to work for the "republic" and not for the Sith. It was quite awhile before the Sith declined out of the Republic and it became the Republic again and the Sith have disappeared. So you might need to rework the profile just a little bit. I can tell you however during the time of the Sith occupation the "Federation" popped up kinda as the "good republic replacement." The Jedi also went to the Federation which was an allied group of planets in the far reaches of space. It's possible he worked with them who were former Republic against the Sith.
Other than that it looks pretty good. Let me know when you make the changes.
